He wiped all some of the blood and soot from his face to reveal it unscathed, and flashed a blinding white grin at all of them:
Should be, wiped off some of etc. It's in Chapter 11.
I'm enjoying the humour ('Bloody Torchwood!' said by the policeman, how well known they were, even then, to the people of Cardiff and how London would have a coronary if they knew) and the relationships.
In your previous story in the 'King and Country' series, I liked the role reversal of Jack and Ianto from the current show with Jack the boss and Ianto the teaboy, to Jack being the teaboy and Gerald the boss.
I also really liked Harriet's appearance to Gerald in this story, "Scareship" and how he realized he must meet her in the future and that she knows him. Very well done, his thoughts.
Congratulations on finishing it, and only a week or so before I started reading it.
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Date: 2009-02-27 07:27 am (UTC)I'm reading a story of yours that I found via a rec of a fic of your, on
He wiped all some of the blood and soot from his face to reveal it unscathed, and flashed a blinding white grin at all of them:
Should be, wiped off some of etc. It's in Chapter 11.
I'm enjoying the humour ('Bloody Torchwood!' said by the policeman, how well known they were, even then, to the people of Cardiff and how London would have a coronary if they knew) and the relationships.
In your previous story in the 'King and Country' series, I liked the role reversal of Jack and Ianto from the current show with Jack the boss and Ianto the teaboy, to Jack being the teaboy and Gerald the boss.
I also really liked Harriet's appearance to Gerald in this story, "Scareship" and how he realized he must meet her in the future and that she knows him. Very well done, his thoughts.
Congratulations on finishing it, and only a week or so before I started reading it.
Off to read more.